Peer Feedback

Peer Review & Action Plan INTERIM 1

From this peer review, I can tell that I will need to Harvard reference all of the links in my bibliography. And flesh out my annotations a bit more in my word association, definition and mind map in my initial forgotten research. This peer review was helpful as it gave me an idea of what I need to improve on before submitting for a deadline.

Ideas Gen Peer Feedback

Peer Assessor’s Name: Jamie Roberts

Things to improve on:

• More annotations describing what I am doing and why.
• More techniques for ideas gen.
• Lay out in the project management template.
• Try adding fabrics/textures to designs.
• Maybe fix character proportions.

From this peer feedback, I can tell that I will need to flesh out my ideas generation annotations and add a few more techniques. I also need to make sure that my ideas generation is laid out in the project management template. I also need to fix the proportions for my character ideas so that they look a bit more realistic. Also add some fabric textures to some of my designs. This peer feedback was helpful as it gave me an idea of what I need to improve on before submitting for a deadline.

Peer Review & Action Plan INTERIM 2

From this peer review, I can tell that I have variation throughout the work that I have produced. The only thing that I need to improve on in this assessor’s opinion is my annotations for my photo bashes and silhouettes. This peer review was helpful as it gave me an idea of what I need to improve on before submitting for a deadline.

Peer Review Task 3.1 & 3.3

From this peer review, I can tell that I need to update my development log to the latest week (Week 10). I also need to do some research for my exhibition boards so that I can plan how I want them to look.